Comments for Aaron Sweeny Writing http://writing.aaronsweeny.com A collection of short stories and books Sun, 15 Apr 2012 02:50:24 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 Comment on NaOH, Don’t Lye to Me, Soap by Nettie http://writing.aaronsweeny.com/?p=21#comment-7 Nettie Sun, 15 Apr 2012 02:50:24 +0000 http://writing.aaronsweeny.com/?p=21#comment-7 Great details! Good job! Great details! Good job!

]]> Comment on NaOH, Don’t Lye to Me, Soap by Alicia http://writing.aaronsweeny.com/?p=21#comment-6 Alicia Fri, 13 Apr 2012 20:00:00 +0000 http://writing.aaronsweeny.com/?p=21#comment-6 Amazing! Amazing!

]]> Comment on NaOH, Don’t Lye to Me, Soap by Noah http://writing.aaronsweeny.com/?p=21#comment-2 Noah Sun, 08 Jan 2012 09:34:05 +0000 http://writing.aaronsweeny.com/?p=21#comment-2 That’s a fantastic story (I’m not lying). The story’s character as a well-regimented man fit perfectly with his later disclosed scheme. I loved the spartan living conditions so he could direct his focus on his one goal. Well written, perfectly paced, this is a great story. And it has an ending! A really good ending! Too many stories start off great then shit-the-bed on the final page. This didn’t at all. If this came through the NAR office, I would emphatically click “yes”. Quite frankly I’m jealous. That’s a fantastic story (I’m not lying). The story’s character as a well-regimented man fit perfectly with his later disclosed scheme. I loved the spartan living conditions so he could direct his focus on his one goal. Well written, perfectly paced, this is a great story. And it has an ending! A really good ending! Too many stories start off great then shit-the-bed on the final page. This didn’t at all. If this came through the NAR office, I would emphatically click “yes”. Quite frankly I’m jealous.

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